Help with HBOA Auditions

I have an audition for the Honor Band of America soon, and I was wondering if anyone wants to help me practice for it. I'll play a recording of it on the computer, and whomever I send the recording to can give me tips on how to improve. Any help I can get will be extremely appreciated, since this band is a huge honor to make (I'm going against people from all ages all over the United States). Thanks in advance!!

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